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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-1 10:19:40 | 显示全部楼层
家族你抽什么疯...给我降级又升回去...这节有点短 今天下午可能再更一节
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-2 10:06:46 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【更新至CHAPTER II PART V】

本帖最后由 Westvoice 于 2013-8-2 10:08 编辑
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PART V
Something’sdifferent this time, it just doesn’t feel right.
Leaving
AfterMeteor Awards.
‘Bryan! Where’reyou going?’ Kian saw him walked away.
‘Well...nothing...I...Ithink I see a friend over there.’
Can’t say he’sreally lying. He went to Louis.
‘I don’t wannastay in Westlife.’
‘No kidding,have a good sleep & go back to your work.’
‘I’m notkidding. I’m really tired of it. I wanna enjoy my life, golf, football, &Kerry & my children. I’ve told Kerry about it.’
‘You’re alwayslike this, childish. Go back to them, I’m busy.’
‘But I’mserious!’
‘You always sayyou’re serious when you’re joking.’
‘But this time Ipromise what I said was NOT A JOKE!’
‘Okay I’m busy& would you please close the door when you leave?’
He walked out,unhappily. Louis smiled, he knew he’d be alright soon, he’s just this way.

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Time for a bandphoto. Bryan refused—not only refused to take the photo with others, but alsorefused to answer anyone’s questi**.
‘It’s unusualLouis.’ Kian came & said, ‘He’s never been like this.’
‘He’ll be usualsoon, don’t worry.’
‘I know himbetter than you really. He DOES always joke, but not about such things.’
‘Just a kid,playing you know.’
‘It’s not a gameLouis.’
‘How’s thephoto?’
‘You gottalisten to me Louis, it’s not a game this time, not fun. What if he really isn’tkidding?’
‘Ki you alwaysworry too much.’
‘Believing himis anyway better than that we think he’s kidding while he’s really serious.’
‘Okay let’s seewhat he’ll say next shall we?’
Kian sighed,walked away. Louis was right in a way, Bryan just loved kidding. But this time,he didn’t think it’s so simple. He knew Bryan wouldn’t kid on such things, hehadn’t ever. He was really afraid that Bryan’d do as what he said.

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The usual partyafterwards. Bryan wasn’t that active, but everyone just thought he’s tired. HeWAS tired, that’s right, but only he himself knew why.
The people justenjoyed the party & happily went back home. A party without Bryan was kindof boring, but it’s still great. Louis was ready to leave, but a woman’s voicestopped him.
‘Mr. LouisWalsh?’
‘Yes?’ he turnedaround & saw Kerry.
‘Do you knowwhat’s wrong with Bryan these days?’
‘Nothing wrong,he’s alright!’
‘But he’sobviously NOT alright at home, &just now.’
‘At home?’
‘He wascompletely another person! Since I came back! Oh I really wonder why he’s likethis...he doesn’t smile that much & you & Westlife all know that henever stopped talking right?’
‘We usuallyignore him.’
‘But he nearlysaid nothing during the dinner yesterday!’
‘He told me hewanna leave Westlife just now.’
‘Oh is it true?’
‘I don’t thinkso. You know he loves joking, who knows if it’s again a kid?’
‘I hope itis...Westlife’s really a great band, I don’t wanna see them part.’
‘I think he’llbe alright days later. He’s still too young.’
Kerry seemed sad,maybe for the party, maybe for Bryan, or maybe for Westlife. Bryan didn’tnotice that.; j+ @1 E4 N) c' A! h5 j. I% a' d
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-2 10:31:37 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER II PART VI】

PART VI
I can’t forgetafter a while, the day you walked into the room. At once I knew the hurt thatyou’d been through.
You Must Have Had a Broken Heart
‘Kian?’ Bryanknocked at the door, finally, after days of thinking. & now, reading hislines all over again, he felt his heart beating.
‘Yes--’ answeredcasually inside the closed door.
The door slowlyopened.
‘Hey...come in.’the broad smile was bright as usual.
‘Should I reallysay it out...’ he asked himself--it should be at least the tenth time.
Bryan walked in& locked the door inattentively, then sat onto the bed next to Kian.
Seconds ofsilence.
Finally--‘Kian?’
‘Yes?’
‘You see,’ eyesstill on the groud. He couldn’t make himself move his eyes into Kian’s. Theusual smile was gone, ‘we’ve been too busy to go home.’
He paused, &Kian waited.
Again, silence.
‘So...I mean, myfamily needs me.’ he raised his eyes & glanced at Kian.
He propped hiselbows against the knees, hands wringing together.15 After eyesfocusing on the floor for a few seconds, he stood up, slowly walked towards thewindow.
Bryan sat there,nothing to do. He just stayed there still, unknowingly kept his eyes on thesilhouette facing the window.16
‘Are you sure?’Kian asked suddenly.
Dumbfounded bythe unexpected question, ‘Sure what?’ he answered after seconds of pause.
‘To quit.’ thevoice was peace.
He couldn’tanswer. He didn’t mean to hurt him, did he? He just hoped he could hide thereal reason, though they would know it one day after all. Head dropped.
Kian seemed tonotice it. He turned around & walked towards him, came sitting next to him,put his hands on the cold ones.
‘Tell me, areyou sure?’
Bryan looked up& met the profound blue eyes. He turned away.
‘Tell me , itdoesn’t matter.’ the voice was calm & mild, ‘Are you sure?’
He noddedslowly, avoiding meeting the charming blue.
‘Alright.’ heslightly patted on Bryan’s hands, stood up again & looking outside thewindow. Hard to tell what was in his mind from the composed voice.
‘You’ve toldLouis?’
‘Yes but hedoesn’t believe me.’
‘Simon?’
‘Not yet.’
‘& the otherthree?’
‘No.’
Seconds ofsilence.
‘Come.’ Kiancaught his hand.
15我竟然兩節都沒有寫注釋...原型是My Love MV開頭. Ki正經的時候還是挺有隊長樣的... http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjYxMTg2MDA0.html00:12
16原型是Greatest Hits. 話說Ki側影很好看的44a~開個小差. 附上一訪談. 與文無關. 只是大愛這個. Ki可萌了呢. 有人說吃豚寶兒餅乾的時候臉紅了呢... http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzg5MjEzMjYw.html?f=18080703 我這人愛走神. 你們看到後面就會深有體會的. 原諒吧. :)  }$ h0 s) H" y' O  _
17初稿是:
B:Maybetomorrow?
K:What about now?
被小C一句你是來搞笑的麼給打回去了.../ |2 h) V* I5 S% m" I1 p$ Y/ x5 G
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sharkianicky 发表于 2013-7-29 20:058 t' F4 u  J) l$ h; M7 c6 f- d
。。英文看的好不习惯啊。。。。。。。。好吧。1 L- |% q2 F) O" O: l9 k7 W" k
还是顶一下咯。加油

  H$ s. e: S! _主要是语言不习惯啦。。排版什么的,,,都不是大问题。。。毕竟英语看的太少了= =课本都看不下去。。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-5 10:03:04 | 显示全部楼层
PART VIII  ~, E, e2 Y& S2 d1 [4 W
Our dreams are young & we both know they’ll take us where we want to go.5 B" ?- t" W& M/ ~* w
Nothing’s Gonna Change My Love for You
$ Y- W' e; T5 r  ?# h‘Louis! Louis!’
4 O5 ~8 _& r& Q, \" TLouis was enjoying the beautiful morning when everyone suddenly rushed in.
* [% ?2 k2 a8 y! h# E# h" s! {2 x‘Oh my apple pie!’ cried Louis, ‘Thank God I’ve got no heart attack.’
: k: Z8 l2 D* w' }. t2 x. p‘Is Bryan serious?’ Mark asked.0 R$ v$ I  X- X9 j! T* e9 J
‘What?’: p. c: g2 k1 y9 e
‘Well it’s Bryan said he’s gonna quit,’ Nicky explained, ‘is he serious or just a joke?’" t# X0 Q0 a& U% p
‘He...told you?’ Louis unexpectedly became quiet.: I" O# ]& L# L3 Z" R& p$ {
‘Bryan told me that evening,’ said Kian, ‘& that night I told Nicky.’
7 ]  {3 f6 C. @8 m4 f‘Then this morning Nix came & we all knew it.’ Shane continued.
# N3 r0 N& y$ t0 J: R5 R‘I think it’s just a joke.’ said Louis, ‘take it easy boys, I think he’ll be alright soon.’
  K8 R* P) @3 v, C  ENo one answered. Louis may could take it easy, but they couldn’t. Six years, they couldn’t imagine what it’d be if Bryan really left them.
* ~- o% Q- k5 e5 [) E" T; d/ cBryan was always the one who could bring happiness whenever they were. He never stopped talking, they’d just ignore him, but anyway, he couldn’t really disappear.
! H9 M9 S3 k8 f/ qThey knew without Bryan--if really they had to--Westlife wouldn’t stop. Fans waiting, they couldn’t just say goodbye like this. Only six years! It’s not like they’ve dreamed.
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5 B0 b* z& N0 A! s7 T3 l% ^3 q, HTuesday. That evening, Bryan called everyone, & said what he’s said to Kian.
' E! T0 i3 p+ n2 aThey became worried. Then Louis was woken up at night by a call.
6 ?& V: t' X7 U9 e5 {6 t‘Louis! Louis do you still think it’s a joke? He told us! Everyone! I think it’s really serious this time!’ in the phone it was Kian shouting.. e( ]  X# [, y$ M) G$ E
He really felt strange this time. He got up so early on Wednesday morning. He couldn’t understand. They’re different from Boyzone. During the six years, everything was right. He felt frightened. He called Nicky.+ w7 o9 W; Y% _" I6 f  q! `
To his surprise, Nicky has already got up.
3 X8 Y- }& l  J1 l‘Hello?’
2 A+ {9 D5 F" w5 {7 H  }‘Hi I’m Louis.’" l/ O/ W- |5 {  r! }; q5 [
‘Yes?’( n9 S  L# G7 }! c
‘Can we...is your...I mean, can we use your home?’7 I9 P4 u; F# }2 c
‘What?’7 T3 r0 ?% ]0 l* n8 J7 w  Y+ r
‘We gotta talk about Bryan’s things.’
5 _4 U  k& }; s2 F: V) m‘Oh I got it.’3 `; x: H: |' ?0 {
‘Is it okay?’' [/ o3 n5 r7 A' z" C+ @
‘Yes when?’- W- b3 t: `+ ]7 t. y6 a
‘Now. I’ll call them, you just wait there.’5 Q$ u5 W) ~$ G' J, O; l  f
‘Nothing else?’9 f) Q' r1 q' Q: u. K) R
‘I think so.’; D& [1 W1 f; [+ M3 T7 G5 E+ |' L$ x7 H. c
So it was. The four & Louis met at Nicky’s house. The Byrnes welcomed them as usual. Then the bedroom door was locked.! J( V* L$ \/ P% Y* C4 }, z
‘So,’ Louis started, ‘now we all know it. If he really wanna leave, just let him go.’
) d3 x# u- T1 L) R" _% M‘Of course. It’s no good for anyone if we kept him stay.’ said Kian, ‘That day when he told me about it, I thought he wasn’t joking. It’s different.’
+ i# J6 O$ i" P; u) n& M‘I heard the sound of guitar that night, very late already. I wonder who it was, & I myself just couldn’t fall asleep as well, so I got up & went downstairs. I’ve never imagined it was Ki. He told me Bryan’s gonna quit.’
7 k  @, s- C& Y: J* s* v4 Q, ^‘Next morning,’ Mark said, ‘I was sleeping when Nicky broke into my room. It seemed he’d knocked many times but I didn’t answer...he told me everything...my mind wasn’t really clear then but I understood Bryan had decided to quit.’& ^% ^$ G& r6 Q" ~9 L$ J2 r, ~- J; ~9 D
‘Let him go. It’s his dicision.’ said Shane., x0 N5 H9 y- F) p6 k/ M/ j, z
‘That’s what I thought. He has the right for his happy life. But we gotta go on.’. M! ^6 x& u' K! z$ x
‘That’s for sure. The passion and love we have for Westlife is still 100%’ Kian said., }3 v- }8 N! K5 @, Q% j" ]
‘It’s great in the band!’ Shane went on, ‘We’ve just gone through six years! That’s too short!’
8 P( o4 i) S6 [" u3 D‘We still have four.’ Nicky took the thread up, ‘In Westlife it’s just our life.’
, f1 C5 }% F( H0 P0 J5 d4 D‘I don’t know what to do if we just disband like this.’
+ A9 _% i: r! l  s. o‘I’ve got used to it. We can’t suddenly stop.’6 J! ^0 y5 L( y
‘Brian’ll like to see us going on I believe.’
1 Z4 v6 n9 }6 d8 T1 T; l‘That’s the point.’: H) X9 f( m7 p' n7 N
‘I was wondering what the new album would be like last week.’  p2 q& G+ h2 S6 O0 j- P
‘How long do you think we’ll last?’7 T3 z  U/ i$ u8 o; c
‘At least another six years!’
: r# U! q$ b1 j3 i3 d‘Maybe we can reach 15.’* I$ _; `3 m- C% u& S" ?
‘I want the 10 years tour!’
% R4 V* n+ M: J. E) b. Q‘You’ll see it. Possibly at Croke Park.’
5 r2 x) W1 a$ e2 t3 w3 M5 \‘Oh can’t believe it!’
8 C" ~7 F: U. O' m‘You’ll believe it.’
4 N/ k: G6 O% f  C# D+ ^Things were clear. Brian would leave, Westlife would go on. Now Louis knew how much Westlife meant to them & how much they loved it. They’d do all the best for it, 100%. Dreams were there, waiting.# b2 I* [0 x7 P

$ H1 v9 V/ J" b$ z& ~8 s: MThe news soon spread, all the people around them knew it, the lawyers, financial staffs & whatever.% w, T- n) R- |& z( R5 h5 C
‘Is it true Louis? Brian’s gonna quit?’
# X. [. d2 K3 N  U‘Yes, we’ll let him go.’5 ?# R8 C2 P1 F
‘What about the other four?’. J4 {, M* h6 h4 d% A* f$ O
‘Westlife’ll go on.’
: S4 |/ V1 P# H5 r( W+ e‘Oh that’s good. Such a band, so talented, it’d be what a pity if they disbanded.’- @9 [' x" q1 B) V$ y
‘They’ll be happy to hear it. They still gotta prove themselves.’
! Z3 N2 d2 N! T; i# a' M‘What does Simon say?’
0 R4 e4 W) z) c" L‘He said I must keep Westlife. He said we gotta get more No.1s, & everyone’ll forget all the unhappiness.’( U1 w' [% C! x8 `; D* M2 ~9 R4 b* f  U
‘He’s still in LA right?’
& L. C* a" u; l5 F‘Yes.’2 n" n6 n: ^. _$ C, p
‘Such big events, why doesn’t he come back?’% _/ F8 l8 {- H& e, f9 ^( O6 s* L
‘Too busy you know that. He answered my call, that’s good enough.’
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$ K: z6 X9 m4 t# b8 G' P0 M‘GATHER ROUND KIDS--’! G0 z3 j9 I6 p3 ?: v
‘What’s up?’2 z, p7 o- f* m7 d
‘Louis are you alright?’# F! U$ n8 ]! N6 r. ^  I' j# W$ \! `
‘Well here kids, it’s about Brian’s things.’ he sat down, ‘So Brian you’re sure for your dicision?’7 _$ P) j$ S- S
‘Yes.’4 X' ?2 F6 h# {( h
‘Then that’s it. We’ve talked, & we think it’s right for you to quit.’ he glanced at Kian.
7 h1 s0 y: N/ H3 hKian understood & went on, ‘We respect your decision, & we’re glad that you can go on your own way. Thank you for the years together...’ he couldn’t calm himself, he knew tears gonna flush out.
2 q7 z! ^3 Q2 x8 o  E  u  ?. qNicky patted on his shoulder, ‘Goodbyes’re always sad you know,’ he took a deep breath, voice wasn’t that peace as usual, ‘but it’ll be a nice beginning for all of us. We’ll keep on with the career of Westlife.’8 q1 w( C+ F- }4 R% v% K
Tears dropping, wetted everyone’s eyes. Every goodbye will be followed by a hello, future’s still there.: |  G% o# D6 L. H- b

$ o  y: e' l4 r4 qBrian left with Louis for a TV show. It was an audition for Eurovision, & the song written by Brian got the prize. They celebrated together as if nothing had happened.
: L. c- j2 j# p/ q' UNothing had happened, that’s true. Friends, as usual. What happened?
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-6 09:46:48 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER II PART X】

PARTX
We both know we’ll go on from here, ‘causetogether we are strong.
Unbreakable
Brian left like this. Hedidn’t wanna stay, so he left, it’s easy. Though disappointed, it’s good. Theystill wished the friend happy, he’d done so much for Westlife, now he’s gonnado things for himself & his family. It’s fair.
Brian had nothing to beblamed, he WAS kind of crazy, sometimes he joked too much, but everyone lovedhim. Friends, it’s alright.
His family supported him,Kerry wanted him to stay in the band, but after all she wasn’t against him. Hesaid he didn’t care about money, there’s something more important.
Louis knew it was what reallyspecial of Westlife.
He created Boyzone byauditi**, they wanna be famous from the very beginning. They couldn’t see whatthey had had. Their song were all picked out by Louis, they should’ve seen bythemselves, so that they would know how difficult it was to do pop music well,there’s always someone wanna take your place. Louis could still remember oncehe told Ronan that he was like Cliff Richard & Ronan got angry. It waspraise in fact. He liked Cliff Richard & Elton John.
But Shane, Kian & Mark  from Sligo had very simple backgrounds. Nicky& Brian were very young when Louis found them from Dublin, what they wantedwas just a band. Not being famous, just music, & realizing the dreams. Theywere careful with everyone & everything. They were really honest to eachother, understanding, supporting, loving.
Louis didn’t know whatBrian’s plan was for the future. He’s busy with a new band, & his wife& children.
Five became four, they werelike a new band, even more hardworking, filled with new energy &determination. Louis knew they would still be popular, Brian’s things wouldn’tmatter. Tours weren’t cancelled, fans were still crazy, screaming, cheering.Louis esteemed the boys, he’s seen so many people destroyed by reputation, butthey’re still so down-to-earth.
All tickets already soldout, they’d start the tour in Belfast. Louis believed it’d be better than anyperformance before. Brian’s quit made them stronger, they’ve seen so many bandsdisbanded, Boyzone, 5ive, Backstreet Boys...they didn’t want such things happento them, they knew the fans were waiting, that kept encouraging them to carryon. Louis told himself they could, he knew they’d get another No.1 after thetour.
Friends, so unbreakable.28
28在這章結束的時候. 我覺得有必要給大家看一看我寫這些所依據的資料. http://westvoice.blog.163.com/blog/static/209564157201352323529114/ 翻譯得很累的...而且還不是純粹的翻譯. 有些東西沒有寫上去. 其實網易的博客和微博我都不怎麼用. 還有提前說一聲吧.下一章可能寫得不太合實際了. 這章還挺hopeful 下一章就該sad. 而且下一章的時間是設定在發佈會當天晚上. 不是豚寶兒和BB出去那天.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-6 09:59:45 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER III PART XII】

PARTXII
I cry, silently. I cry inside of me.
ICry
Back to 1999, Australia. Propaganda during the day, tonight in the pub,as they said, Shnicky’s Night. Two sitting face to face, two glasses of Irishcoffee. Taste of home.
From different cities, never met before, only one year, they’d become soclose.
Shane still remembered how they started to sing their new songs &ended up with laughter--his voice was charming with soft accent,33& while singing his smile became so enchanting. That night it was just asif no one else around, they were completely enjoying their own world.34
Lost in the memory, the old melodies naturally streamed out35 ofhis lips. They were 5 then, together for one dream. They were young &energetic, enjoying this band so much--the crazy nights in nightclubs, thetours seething with the fanatical fans, the delights & throbs of theunbelievable success coming so quickly...now one left, everything seemeddifferent.36 Itdidn’t really matter whether they were 5 or 4 while rehearsing, but just feltsomehow strange. & his voice would never appear again in their songs, newones & the lives of the old ones--who would take his place? He looked atthe silent person sitting across.
‘Possible isn’t it.’ he said to himself. He could remember how herevelled in the mellifluous & mellow singing that night in Australia. Ofcourse his voice wasn’t in Brian’s style, but since they’d transformed, as theytitled the last album with Brian, TURNAROUND, some changes were needed. ‘&harmony parts DO need some chances for soli.’ Brian’s right in a way.37
He wanted t tell him, but he just couldn’t make himself say ‘Brian’, thename was like a thorn buried deep inside his heart.38
He wondered how could tears filled the eyes during the goodbyes &the hugs in the day--he tried to push tears out but failed, eyes were dry, allthe sadness streamed back. The salty liquids should’ve flown out from eyes, butnow corroding the stabled heart. Peace outside, crying inside, tears refused toobey his direction. He felt sorry for he couldn’t even drop tears for Brian’squit after six years together--were the tears used up? He wasn’t on purpose,really. Sometimes sadness can’t be expressed by tears, but only kept inside,locked, & wounding ourselves--no one to blame, it’s fate.39
All in Nicky’s eyes. He stood up, embraced Shane from the back, put hishead on the shoulder, holding his hand.40
‘Hey...it’s in pub...you know what I mean...’ he felt himself focusedeveryone’s eyes. Kind of nervous, he’d never experienced such warmth fromNicky--he used to impress people s a frosty & mature person underneath thelovely face.
Since he didn’t resp**e, Shane just accepted & closed up.
Silken hair nestled up to his face. Never before, he felt himself neededthe warmth so much. The hurt souls have founded their homes inside eachother’s. Tears still eroding the hearts, but at least there’s someone sharingthe pain.
Two sitting face to face, two glasses of Irish coffee--taste of home. Nowords--no need words, & more than words. Just together.
33真心愛Dublin accent...可萌了跟小孩似的~
34本來想用private world的. 想到新概念那個private conversation的摧殘...總覺得private更像lovers...含蓄點好. 畢竟才99**嘛. 別過分了.
35本來是用come out...不要想歪...這是MARKEVIN的事...不是SHNICKY...MARKEVIN是下一章.
36一種‘遍插茱萸少一人’的感覺...茱萸這個是指Cornus officinalis. Evodia rutaecarpa (Juss.) Benth.和Zanthoxylum ailanthoides三種植物的總稱...要做純潔的好孩子...
37這就純屬瞎扯了. 這事也不是Shay說決定就決定的了. 不要介意. 個人很愛兩隻和聲. 和聲控我是和聲控!!!
38這個‘心裏的刺’是看小說看多了的結果...應該是長霧的FH先生系列. 哪一部我忘了. 反正這系列都挺好玩的. H不多. 尺度也比較小. 推薦看看. Thanks 小C.
39想哭哭不出來的感覺真的很難受! 每次我想到WL解散就是這種感覺...
40想到了一張圖...
Shnicky53.jpg
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 12:13:02 | 显示全部楼层
PARTXIV
I’m too shy to ask, I’m too proud to loose. But sooner or later, I gottachoose.
IfI Let You Go
Kevin’s call hasn’t come for a week. Mark doubted if he really’dforgotten him. If so, maybe it was time for him to forget Kevin as well. Hefelt woeful for such an ending of their relati**hip for only several months,but still forced himself to delete the name from the phonebook--& afterthinking for a while, he added the number into the blacklist. Hoping he couldbe completely forgotten by breaking off their contest, he just couldn’t helppaying attention if the blacklist had stopped a call from Kevineveryday--hopefully, & hopelessly.
Busy with FACE TO FACE. Already summer, preparing to release in October.
‘DESPERADO! NOT DESPERATION!’ shouted Shane reproachfully, ‘It’s thethird time! What’s wrong with you these days?! You’ve never been like this--howmany times’ve your mind wandered as singing?! & out of tune & forgetthe lyrics &--’
‘Stop!’ Kian shouted an order.
‘How long left? If--’
‘I SAID, STOP!’ impressive voice echoing, sharp eyes were awesome, pearlnight blue46irides radiated keen rays--no one dared to say one more word.
Dreadful silence.
‘Everyone will go through such a period,’ continued calmly, ‘that whensomething you don’t want it happen really takes place, you just can’tconcentrate on anything.’ when Brian left--only Mark & Nicky understood.47Brian quit & Kian became completely different for a few weeks. Whileworking he was still the staid leader, but when alone--no one knew how he keptthe pain inside & carrying on. He’s only Mark’s elder by one month, &Mark knew it’s hard to bear such sadness & what’s more, to hide it fromothers, just like what he himself was facing now.
‘You now feel unsatisfied with him,’ Kian didn’t turn to Shane, butobviously the words’ for him, ‘do you still remember what YOU were like afterMichael was eliminated?’ his voice was peace, but chilled him to the bone.
‘But--’ but what’s the situation now? Already July, how long left forthe album?
‘It’s enough.’ words stopped by the low notice from Nicky. He turned& met the admonitory eyes. Then a hand patted on his shoulder, Nickysilently went out & closed the door.
No one except him noticed when Kian was talking  to Shane facing the window, Mark slowly movedto the door & left. Since then he realized things weren’t so simple as Kiansaid, just something happened against Mark’s will. He knew he wanted to dealwith it alone, but sometimes things have to be spoken out.
A supple black shadow flew through the stairs.48
About to knock the door, yet he suddenly stopped.
‘What should I do? He hadn’t called me for days...’
‘Well...will he be angry with me?’
‘But Mum...it was I who hung up first.’
‘Yeah that’s right, we’re busy with the songs but ‘cause of this I justcan’t keep my mind completely in it &...& Shane got angry & Kistopped him, I felt myself...I felt tears gonna rush out...I don’t knowwhy...so I escaped back into my room & called you...’
‘All right...anyway I’ll try...love ya too...okay bye.’
Silence back inside the locked door.
‘Hey what’re ya waitin’ for?’
‘Stop Shane!’ Nicky pulled him back.
‘What to wait? The call’s ended!’
‘Wait.’simple resp**e.
‘He can’t--’
‘He can. Keep quiet, or go.’
Sighed, nothing to say. The closer the friends are, the more pungent thewords are.
Nicky was leaning against the wall, so patient that he wondered if heknew what’s wrong with Mark.
Finally, ‘When can you--’
‘Go.’
‘Hey you--’
‘I’ve told you, quiet, or go.’
‘But--’
‘No but.49You won’t be useful at all in the room. You don’t understand it.’
‘Really, he’s right.’ Kian’s voice.
He didn’t answer.
‘Please,’ said Kian, looking straight into Shane’s eyes. His words weremild, but eyes so cool, ‘you’d better leave.’
No choice. He walked away, back to his room.
‘Still wait?’
Nodded Nicky, kept still. The drought in the hall way caressed theirfaces.
Sun sinking, lingering glow shined on Nicky’s body. Totally in black,50his figure looked even more slender. ‘Cause of the tiredness these days causedby the preparation of the new album, the fair face seemed more angular.
Finally, ‘Go in?’ soft voice from the thin lips.
Answered with light knocks on the door.
As they imagined, Mark came to open the door but didn’t let them in& rest on the doorframe instead. Standing in the doorway, Kian was about toask to let them in, but a hand held his. Seeing Nicky winked, he understood.
‘Alright?’ asked Nicky.
‘What?’
‘Don’t take the wounds to your heart will you?’
‘Oh of course not.’ Mark smiled, looking down.
‘Good boy.’ joked Kian, patted his head on tiptoe. ‘So let’s come backto the story.’ he continued, ‘It’s true that you don’t look well these days,what’s wrong?’
‘Nothing.’
‘There must be something. Tell us it doesn’t matter.’
‘But nothing, really.’
Powerless to make him speak anything out, Kian turned to Nicky, clearblue eyes asking for help. He responded with an unfathomable smile before thesuffocative silence.
Still leaning against the wall, blond hair waving slightly with thebreeze. He turned aside, looking somewhere else, no words.
Kian understood--what a means! He kept silent, hands wringing.51What he could & dared do was just to wait. Nicky wouldn’t be morehair-raising than when he was gazing into the distance so peacefully withoutspeaking, smiling or even moving. He was just like air, but freezing air.
What could he do? He kept looking down at the floor--neat tiles huh?52Now no one looked at him, Mark however felt UNCOMFORTABLE. He didn’t know whatthey wanna do & what he should do. He couldn’t stand such quietness. Sunsetting, he remembered the broadcast said a heavy rain’d arrive tomorrow--ormaybe soon tonight, for him.
‘Alright I tell you okay?’ no choice.
‘That’s a dear.’ answered Nicky with an ethereal voice.
‘So...so do you...’ how to begin?
The two waited.
‘No one helps me?’ Mark complained inwardly.
No resp**e.
Mark pouted & went on, ‘Well...so do you know Kevin McDaid?’ heasked carefully.
‘V?’
Someone knew it! ‘Oh you know this! Then...do you mind he’s a...’ hecouldn’t say the word, he was somehow afraid. Three simple letters, but not soeasy to be spoken out. He’s told them, but he never really understood how theythought.
‘No.’ Nicky raised his hand, mentioned at him to stop. ‘So what’swrong?’
Head dropped, he kept the tears in the eyes & told them all aboutthe call & what he thought that night & what he’s done & wannado--to his surprise, they didn’t interrupt.
‘Why don’t you tell us earlier?’ asked Kian.
No answer. He felt tears streamed down the cheeks. That’s right, whydidn’t he tell them earlier?
He didn’t see Nicky winked at Kian & took out a hankie, but justfelt something soft touched his face & wept the tears. Then a warm hug withKian’s soothing voice, ‘It’s alright, we’ll help. Don’t worry, will you?’
Got out of Kian’s arms, he took a look at his receding figure &locked the door again.
46這是我特意挑的顏色! 從上到下依次是:德語. 英語. 法語. 西班牙語. 義大利語. 荷蘭語. Google Translate辛苦了. http://wenku.baidu.com/view/5cd927d6b14e852458fb5708.html
RAL K5 CLASSIC
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Bleu nuit nacré
Azul noche perlado
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47手稿裏是沒有Nix的. 後來想想. 得為Nix後面的聖母形象做準備. 就把他加上去了. 當然聖母還有Ki那是一定的.
48還是Safe MV. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjc5MjgzMTEy.html2:17 很熟的鏡頭吧. 這段最帥了.
49有部小說叫<不瘋魔不成活>.(小C啊你看我多好. 你給我看的我全記得.) 小攻小受這種對話好幾次呢.
0:但是...
1:沒有但是.
0:可是...
1:也沒有可是.
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小說挺好玩的. 挺神經的. 可以算校園吧. 代課學生和導師的故事...
50Seas** In The Sun MV (Studio Version) http://www.yinyuetai.com/video/10066 超愛這個版本. 光線非常棒. 美人穿黑很顯身材的...還有一張Flying Without Wings封面. 找不到大圖. 很鬱悶...SCD Waltz那場也是全黑~跳得不錯呢. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNDU4NTU5NjY0.html
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 13:26:22 | 显示全部楼层
图片有点问题 signed后面是KEWL那张 capital words后面是mark那张
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 13:27:32 | 显示全部楼层
fathers那张是注释55的
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 15:58:43 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER V PART XVI】

CHAPTER V
SOMETHING RIGHT
PART XVI59
We could be morethan just amazing.
Amazing
‘Simon! Reallyno more records?’
‘No more.’
‘Only one? Whatabout <Beautiful World>?’
‘Only one.’
‘But think aboutit Simon! Gravity Tour soon, but only released ONE record?!’
‘&<Gravity>--that’ll be a GREAT album! The BEST EVER! Only ONE record?!’
‘Enough.’
‘Oh Simon! Wecan’t go on like this!’ shouted Mark, ‘<Safe> only got the 10th place!’
‘Yeah it’s theworst rank ever!’
‘What’s so manyrecords for?’ Simon said, ‘You have so many fans & they WILL buy youralbums anyway, what do we append so much money & time on MVs &propaganda of the records?’
‘SIMON!’ Markslammed the door & left.
‘How can you sayso? They’ll buy the album that’s true, but we can’t muddle through it ‘cause ofthis! They’ll buy them that’s ‘cause they love us, they trust us! Now you justtreat them this way?’
‘No more words,just one record. You understand?’
‘NO WE DIDN’T!’Nicky turned around, about to get away. Shane & Kian followed.
‘Where’re yougoing?’
‘IT’S NONE OFYOUR BUSSINESS!’ Nicky was really angry, voice louder & higher than usual,echoing in the room.
He rushed outalong the hallway, two followed.
‘Nix!’
He turned back,it was Mark calling.
‘We gotta leaveSyco you know,’ said Mark, they were gathering in his room, ‘or we’ll see thedeath of this band.’
‘How can he sayTHAT! You heard what he said--“You have so many fans & they WILL buy youralbums anyway, what do we append so much money & time on MVs &propaganda of the records?” I believe if we go on like this the fans’ll soonall disappear.’
‘It’s US whoshould control this band, not HIM.’
‘But he has thepower, we’re only a band under his company.’
‘Why must we beunder HIS company? Now he’s destroying us!’
That’sright--why must they be under HIS company?
That night, Kianwent downstairs, sitting outside. Still the quiet night, high on the sky wasstill stars shining & the silvery new moon. But just a lonely white figure,no one else--he didn’t bring the guitar, maybe he wouldn’t be woken up again.
He called Louis& told him everything, what Simon said & what they think. He knew ifthey go on this way, the band & even their friendship would be in danger.
Things weregetting worse before the tour in Britain. Backstage was just a mess. Shoutingcould be heard everywhere. They refused to get out of the dressing room.
The performancewas alright, but after that, Mark & Shane directly went home in helicopter.As they said, no matter what happened, they gotta go home.
It was true thatthey couldn’t spend all their time on this band. The host work in 2FM wastaking up Nicky more & more time, & his programmes were always popular.Kian’s girlband Wonderland which Jodi was in toured with them, two bands lefthim only four hours everyday for a rest. & Mark’s writing new songs whileNicole was ready to go to school in Sligo. Now Simon kept like this, they feltenough being in the band. Time to terminate--terminate the contract with Syco,or terminate the band.
‘You don’t havetime?’
‘No I SAID I’mbusy.’
‘You’re ALWAYSBUSY! When can you be FREE?!’
‘If YOU had somuch work YOU’d be busy now AS WELL!’
‘ANYWAY AS YOULIKE!’
‘What’s called“AS I LIKE”?! It’s YOU who called me!’
‘OH I DON’TCARE! GO ON BUSY WITH YOUR THINGS!’
Hung up.
That’s howthings were going--the calls those days always ended with shouting. Mark saidhe’s gonna quit, several times. They were afraid--they remembered their promisewhen Brian left.
‘We gotta leaveSyco really! Or I’ll quit, like Brian!’
‘It’s enough!How many times’ve you said so?!’
‘Shane!’ Kianstopped his complain, ‘Mark do you remember what we promised when Brian left?’
‘I do but thinkabout it! I’ve written FOUR songs for the album! It’s gonna be the greatestalbum! & <Where We Are> as well--so great that we could’ve releaseTHREE records for them each! Now only ONE?!’
‘I’ve calledLouis & told him about it.’
‘What can Louisdo? It’s Simon’s company!’
‘Shane you don’tunderstand what I mean! It IS Simon’s company but we can LEAVE SYCO & SIGNA NEW CONTRACT WITH A NEW COMPANY! You got it?’
‘Oh God youthink everything’s that easy as you thought?’
‘Where’s Nix?’suddenly interrupted Kian.
‘Oh heavenknows! Maybe 2FM or whatever--when can he SPEND SOME TIME on this band?!’
‘Shane! It’senough!’
‘THAT’S WHAT ITHOUGHT--ENOUGH! YOU GO ON!’ he got out without closing the door.
‘He--’
The phone rang.He said sorry & picked up the handset.
‘Yes Jodi?’
‘Oh well...okayI’m coming.’
‘Wonderland?’asked Mark.
‘Yes.’ hequickly went out.
Finally, no onecould stand it anymore. No one had the mood to think about the band. Westlife,for the first time, became in danger.
‘Simon is ittrue?’ asked Louis.
‘Of course.’
‘One record?’
‘Yeah.’
‘Simon you gottathink about it. They’re all unsatisfied with it.’
‘One is enough!They have so many fans--’
‘Nix’s right, doyou still remember what he said? “They’ll buy the album that’s true, but wecan’t muddle through it ‘cause of this. They’ll buy them that’s ‘cause theylove us, they trust us. Now you just treat them this way?” “I believe if we goon like this the fans’ll soon all disappear.” He’s right.’
‘But think aboutthe money! The time! You forgot the MV of <What About Now>?’
‘But it’s agreat success really. Fans love it. We’ve paid so we’ve made it. That MV--it’snot what every band can do.’
‘We’ve just paidso much & now again?’
‘Simon do youreally care about THEM or just MONEY? They’re working for dreams, for all thefans; but what’re YOU doing? You only know money!’
‘Without moneywhat can they do?’
‘Listen Simon,if you insist being like this, I really gotta c**ider taking their advice.’
‘What advice?’
‘Leaving Syco.’
So March 14th,after ten years cooperating with Simon Cowell, their contract with Syco wasterminated.
Things wentpeace again, everyone was so happy--they felt they were free now. When theGravity Tour ended, they could begin a new life without Simon, a new life inwhich THEY could take control of their songs & design their future. It’sjust like they were injected fresh blood.
Soon they signeda new contract with RCA, another company of Sony’s. Louis had a meeting withthe band. It seemed their fate was turning, the band’s future was ensured &the friendships between the members were recovering.
On March 25th,the performance in the familiar LG Arena in Birmingham. That evening, they werediscussing the details about their next album with RCA. Wonderland was warmingup, five executives were listening to the four talking about releasing ananthology. Louis was on the phone, expecting anxiously to know how the meetingwas going on.
‘We can choosethree songs for it?’
‘Yes, threeeach.’
‘Oh iontach!’
‘& four newsongs?’
‘Yes, four.We’ll give the work to John Shanks. He’s in LA.’
‘& records?’
‘Three of thefour.’
‘Three records!Then that’s it?’
‘Yes, a<Greatest Hits>, a tour for it, & relax.’
‘Two years?’
‘Two years.’
Seven o’clock.They nearly became crazy--everything was new now, & so enjoyable.
‘Nix?’ calledShane in the dressing room after the concert.
‘What again?’
‘Come here.’
‘You’ve asked meto “come here” for six times you know, it’s the seventh now.’
‘Not a questionthis time, come here.’
‘What?’
‘Pinch me.’
Nicky put hishand on Shane’s forehead.
‘I said PINCHme, what’re you doing?’
‘Not fever, thenwhat’s wrong?’
‘You!’ Shanetook the hand down & pointed at his arm, ‘Here, pinch.’
‘Here better.’Nicky smiled, pinched his face.
‘Hey you!’ Shanestared a glance at him.
‘Then what doyou wanna do to get me here & ask me to pinch you?’
‘Oh I forgotit--it’s real! Oh it’s real!’
‘I think adoctor’ll be useful now.’
‘Don’t you feelhappy about the new contract? It’s just like a dream!’
‘Calm down, we’restill discussing the details of it you know. We’re still trying, we can’t signa lifelong contract with who we don’t know at all.’
‘Of course westill gotta see if it really fits us, or if it’s really a home for Westlife.But the new album! <Greatest Hits>! I’m going crazy I think--it wasreally great! We can do what we wanna do!’
It seemed to bean omen that they wouldn’t be satisfied with just sitting there & letothers decide what they should do. After the four full-house concert at O2Arena, the Gravity Tour ended. Then they flew to LA for the newsongs--<Lighthouse><Beautiful World><Wide Open><Last Mileof the Way>. Mark & Shane wrote two songs.
Yet what Shanesaid in the dressing room came true in July. Louis got a call from RCA whowanna have a long cooperate with Westlife. They offered a 500£ contract,including the plan of several new albums.
‘Hey boys whatdo you think of it? I felt it’s wonderful!’
‘Well...Louisyou see, it’s not that good as you thought.’
‘If we work asit planned, we’ll gotta record new songs in 2012 & start touring again in2013.’
‘Working twoyears without a rest--I’m afraid it won’t get good results you know.’
‘We’re busyenough & tired enough.’
Louis was kindof disappointed, but he’s thought about they’d answer this way. He understoodit. They used the best tour buses, the five-star hotels, the first classes--butthey weren’t young boys, they had their resp**ibilities, they had families& other works. The six-week Asian tour is beginning, working for anothertwo years, they couldn’t stand it.
‘Our child’ll beborn soon.’ said Kian.
‘I really missmy family.’ added Nicky, ‘I gotta go back to see them.’
‘Me too.’ saidShane.
Mark continued,‘I have my songs to write. I’m going a new direction. & I have many otherthings to do.’
‘Think about itkids, & tell me your dicision.’ said Louis. He guessed they may refuse it,& that’s true. They called him later about it. & he has guessed whatwould happen then--he knew them so well. So many years they’ve gone through,they’ve grown up together, now everyone wanna turn their attention to their ownfamily & carreer.
‘Should we keepthis band on Kian?’
‘I felt tiredtoo.’
‘There’s a webtracker who threatened my family in Sligo,’ Shane went on, ‘I really missedthem.’
‘I really have afamily now, a wife & a baby.’ said Kian, ‘& The Voice Of Ireland youknow that, I was invited there for a new job.’
‘I’m alreadyflooded by all kinds of job invitati** you know, since I became the guest DJat 2FM.’
‘You DO have thegift.’
‘& I missedmy family you know, Gina & my twins.’
This night in KualaLumpur, they did as they promised when Brian left--now everyone wanna leavethis band, they knew what they should do--it’s obvious, & easy.
Louis respectedtheir decision. They were always like this, they’d never be forced to dosomething. They COULD go on, & he has planned to release a cover albumafter a holiday. But since they all wanna do their own things, they’ve chosento end everything in their own way. When they announced it, both themselves& the fans were sad, but anyway the goodbye was honourable. Who knows whatwill happen next?
Now in a pub inKuala Lumpur, four young men from a beautiful little country called Irelandwere drinking, talking, having fun. Couldn’t imagine they’ve just decided todisband the best band ever. But the decision would sure bring happiness, it’stheir own things.
Louis knew itclearly that if they just did nothing but enjoy all kinds of happiness withtheir family, they could still live a rich life. & they’d be gratified thatthey came from nobody in a little place yet now became the greatest boybandafter Beatles. They were brave, brave to take the resp**ibilities of theachievements & the end. They’ve thought about an end in 2009, <UsAgainst the World> ranked only the 8th, but they wanted all the recordsranked at least the 5th. He thought it was a big mistake to disband at first,but when Kian announced it & told him, he accepted. He knew they could’vego on for as long time as they want, but in a band there were always manylimits. Some people said they couldn’t have girlfriends, so that the fans wouldthink they could get them. Not only Brian felt so, though he was the first toleave. Louis remembered when Brian left, Kian seemed calm but in fact hisreaction was the most intense. Kian’s talked about everything with Brian, theywere gonna tour in four weeks, he was angry. Brian said he was thinking abouthis own situation, but wasn’t Kian? Brian was an interesting person. He coulddo anything for you, but sometimes he was really crazy. Kian has talked to him,privately. He said he felt it was an end, he felt himself kind of hating Brian.But at last the successful tour told them that their place was still there.Nicky felt so at first as well, but soon they found they still loved Brian--notjust loved the Bryan in Westlife, but Brian McFadden himself. Louis taught themto be strong, he saw them went through all the things & became what theywere today. They helped each other to become somebody from nobody, he thoughthe could little by little get used of the days without the boys. They werereally like his children--he’s seen them grew up, now he’s gonna see themcreated their own worlds.
Gotta say, somecountrymen & Dubliners, well done huh?
59還是把原始的資料放上來吧. 大家翻譯的都很辛苦是吧. 話說找不到英文的原稿. 只能把人家從英文翻到中文的又給翻回去了. 這樣一來可能就有些出入了. 也沒辦法. :P 其實也不完全是翻譯吧. 還得編情節的. http://tieba.baidu.com/p/1257027954 http://www.westlife.cn/westlife-article-1079-1.html http://www.westlife.cn/westlife-article-1125-1.html3 N7 m" f5 z% _" n& G
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 16:06:51 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER V PART XVII】

PARTXVII60
I wanna thank you for the love that you gave me.
Thank You
‘What? Mark you...’
‘We’ve decided.’ he smiled.
‘You were engaged weren’t you?’
‘You’ve just said you’d get married after the farewell tour!’
‘That’s true--that WAS true, but now we think we can’t keep our words.’
‘Oh why?’
‘Well that’s a secret.’
It’s a private thing, wasn’t it. They couldn’t be lovers, but friendswas good still. He remembered that June in 2008, at Croke Park, he thankedKevin & said he loved him; he nearly couldn’t finish the words, the fanscheered & screamed. He was choked.
The years were amazing, but it has ended. They still loved each other& felt thankful to everyone who’s supported them--including themselves.
Memories were beautiful, & so was the future. It’s good enough,wasn’t it.
60這節有點短. 大家看了參考資料就明白了. 而且這是個版權問題. 尊重原作者. 真的什麼也寫不出來. 但是我還是想寫一下. 因為這是在計畫之中的. 我要讓MARKEVIN有頭有尾. http://bbs.westlife.cn/portal.php?mod=view&aid=1089 http://www.yinyuetai.com/fanclub/topic-detail/107695
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 16:13:47 | 显示全部楼层
怎么发帖的时候从来没遇见过ki和mark呢...都是shnix...
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-16 09:44:18 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER VI】

Fragrance filled the dressing room--coffee or perfume?
61畫技一般. 只能畫成這樣了. 應該左邊是Nix寫的Le Grá=With Love. 右邊是Shay寫的Dom Freisin=Me Too. 頭子的字還比較好學. 雖然也不太像... :P

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-16 10:21:41 | 显示全部楼层

【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【AFTERWORD】

AFTERWORD
Thanks
I.感謝一學期以來所有關注我的文的同學們和CN上來看文的各位. 真的沒有想到這麼快就開始寫後記了...雖然說Thanks這部分的底稿很早就打好了. 大概是寫到第四章開頭的時候. :P
II.Particular Thanks
i.感謝小C一直支持此文. 基本上每部分完結都會看. 修改也真的很棒. 很多情節其實都是小C的主意. 比如說第四章就是她放學之後想出來的. 初三累的要死還能想出這麼好的情節挺不容易的.
ii.感謝笑笑當初提供故事. 這是寫文最初的動機. 當時是想按故事小改一下寫的. 結果發現越寫越跑...這篇是練筆. 再會有一篇把故事稍微改動一下的純SHNICKY文. 不及時也沒有別的CP. 應該是下個暑假能出來.
iii.感謝黑姨一直關注寫文的進度. 有她天天在問些到哪兒了我才寫得下去的. 英文真的很費腦子...但是中文更費腦子還沒法看...不知道為什麼. 中文寫出來看這就是彆扭. 不像正常人說話.
iv.感謝無雙一直支持我的文. 特別是支持頭子才不至於寫的太殘...雖然最後還是挺腦殘的...
v.感謝悅悅答應在貼吧上頂文.多好的粉絲. 兩個號頂. love ya :) 雖然我到現在還沒有看到她...其實發文壓力挺大的. 在哪兒都是. 在這邊剛開始更幾乎沒有人回應. 當時都不想再更下去了. 後來想想確實有人答應過我要來看的. 我相信他們也真的會來看的吧. 可能不說話就是了. 所以還是繼續更下去了.
vi.感謝Donny在最後我最寫不下去的時候急著要看. 最後寫的其實是SOMETHING RIGHT那一章. 手稿裏是沒寫的. 要現查資料現編情節現寫...要不是有人催稿. 估計還且寫呢.
vii.感謝所有參考資料的翻譯等等各位.
viii.Great greatthanks to Westlife, the legend itself, & the ones who created the legend,special thanks to you all. Go raibh míle maith agat & gráim thú.
III.好吧最後感謝所有的老師們和老爹老媽沒有發現這篇文的真相. 好讓我平平安安地把它寫完...其實老爸老媽不是不知道. 那天早上6點多起來沒去洗臉刷牙就開始趕文結果沒看時間一直趕到8點多老爹起床了. 很顯然是看見那堆亂糟糟的手稿了. 但是還好因為很亂所以沒看出是寫什麼... :P 手稿什麼的. 看一看吧大家. 正反面總共42頁. 21張數學作業紙. 我自己都看著亂. 文檔錄入的時候經常找不到打到哪兒了...

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