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[原创] 【原创】【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【更新至CHAPTER I PART I】

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PREFACE
I.About the Language
第一次發文. Hope u support :) 貌似沒有先例嘛. 大家都是英譯中的. 不過還是直接上英文.我知道這裏是.cn不是.uk或者.ire. 但是中文試過. 真心沒法看... :( 英文用得很不規矩.不懂的儘管問 (語序呀神馬的). 有錯歡迎改正.關於中文的問題. 用繁體只是因為好看. :P
II.Statements
i.不H. 本人尺度大但寫文一定保守 (再說英文H我會麼...就算我會有人看得懂麼...全是生物的東西...各種拉丁文...).
ii.不拖文. 7章17節半個月到一個月應該更完. 不出意外的話. 出意外再通知.英文比較損腦細胞1. 不更太快了. :P
iii.所有題目.題記一概用WL歌名.歌詞. 由原唱也有翻的.
III. Notice
i.譯版可能有可能沒有. 不要試著用翻譯軟體看. 我試過了. 沒法要的. 有不明白的話問我就好了...:)
ii.此文屬半寫實性綜合CP文. 情節基本上是貼合WL14年歷史的. 有些地方很寫實. 比如BB離隊那章的一些地方. 有些地方就很不寫實了.請勿深究. 因為我這裏能弄到的資料很有限. 有錯的話理解一下吧.當然別光理解哦. 告訴我哦. :P 所謂綜合CP的話. 就是不只有SHNICKY. 還有BK.MARKEVIN. MARKIAN. MARCKY. NICKIAN之類.主CP當然還是SHNICKY+MARKEVIN. 還有各種副CP. 大家也看到題目上那個BRIARCKIANEVIN了. 這個名是和小C一塊起的. 六個人都在裏面了吧. 不解釋.
1說起損腦細胞. 想起一篇小說叫<侍衛生包子>. 作者一H就‘死腦細胞’...可憐的cells...小C給我看的. 小說寫得非常棒.小包子很萌的. 雖然沒到高H但是H還是不少的. 寫的不錯就是了.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 09:45:50 | 显示全部楼层
CONTENTS
CHAPTER I OPEN YOUR HEART
PART I
Not sure if you know this, but when we first met, I got so nervous, Icouldn’t speak. In that very moment, I found that one & my life had foundthis missing piece.
Beautiful In White
PART II
Hey whatever, let your beauty come alive, let your colour fill the sky.& say whatever, why don't you liberate your mind, let your colour fill thesky.
HeyWhatever
PARTIII
You’re the onlyone who really knew me at all.
Against All Odds (Take a Look at Me Now)
CHAPTER II TOO HARD TO SAYGOODBYE
PART IV
So how do I say,do I say goodbye? We both have our dream, we both wanna fly.
Queen of My Heart
PARTV
Something’sdifferent this time, it just doesn’t feel right.
Leaving
PART VI
I can’t forgetafter a while, the day you walked into the room. At once I knew the hurt thatyou’d been through.
You Must Have Had a Broken Heart
PART VII
Smile, what’sthe use of crying? You’ll find that life is still worthwhile, if you justsmile.
Smile
PART VIII
Our dreams areyoung & we both know they’ll take us where we want to go.
Nothing’s Gonna Change My Love For You
PART IX
Now that we’vegone our separate ways, I just can’t live these desperate days.
Bop Bop Baby
PART X
We both know we’ll go on from here, ‘cause together we are strong.
Unbreakable
CHAPTER III TONIGHT
PART XI
Hello happiness,tell me where you’ve been.
Difference in Me
PART XII
I cry, silently. I cry inside of me.
I Cry
CHAPTER IV US AGAINST THE WORLD
PART XIII
Tell me, do you love me, still wanting me, like I need you. There came acrossing on the road.
Never Knew I Was Losing You
PART XIV
I’m too shy toask, I’m too proud to lose. But sooner or later, I gotta choose.
If I Let You Go
PART XV
I’ve made it obvious, done everything but sing it. I’ve crushed you solong, but on & on you get me wrong. I’m not so good with words, & sinceyou never notice the way that we belong, I’ll say it in a love song.
Obvious
CHAPTER V SOMETHING RIGHT
PART XVI
We could be more than just amazing.
Amazing
PART XVII
I wanna thank you for the love that you gave me.
ThankYou
CHAPTER VI WORLD OF OUR OWN
CHAPTER VII LAST MILE OF THE WAY
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 09:53:37 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Westvoice 于 2013-7-29 09:58 编辑
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CHAPTERI
OPENYOUR HEART
PARTI
Not sure if you know this, but when we first met, I got so nervous, Icouldn’t speak. In that very moment, I found that one & my life had foundthis missing piece.
Beautiful In White
‘That’s it.’ Louis with the two went in. ‘Get familiar with each other& I’m leaving.’ As the words being spoken out, he closed the door &left the five at a loss of the words.
‘Well, welcome & names first please?’ Kian broke the silence atlast.
No reaction.
‘Okay. I’m Kian Egan, the leader.’ Head turned to Shane,2‘Shane Filan, & Mark Feehily.’
Still no reaction.
‘&...’ Kian turned to the two new members.
‘Brian McFadden.’ One resp**e from the taller one in loose green shirtbefore Kian finished his words.
‘Thanks &...well...‘ve been in any bands before?’ Kian knew it’skind of too direct to ask such question, but he had nothing better to say.
Brian smiled however, so warm, like the sunshine. It seemed he liked thetopic. ‘Of course. I’ve formed a pop-R&B band with my friends, Tim &Darragh. Our band was called Cartel,Cartel Showband.’
‘Cartel...Cartel Showband...’ Kian whispered, ‘I think I’ve heard aboutit...’
‘We’ve performed live gigs in Dublin pubs. It was in early 1998 as Iremember.’
‘Oh yes, there’s something like that then.’
‘When I was young I’ve always had an interest in singing & dancing.Oh yes, & football.’
‘Oh me too!’
‘But that’s not important ‘cause so many boys like football.’
‘Yeah of course. Which team do you support?’
‘Manchester United!’
‘Oh I love Liverpool better.’
‘They’re great too. Well what was I talking about? Anyway let’s beginfrom the start...when I was young...no, I was born in Rotunda in Dublin &when I was young I’ve always had an interest in singing & dancing.’
‘You’ve said that, & football & you like MU.’
‘Oh have I. Then I attended the Billie Barry Stage School in Dublin withmy sister Susan--well I was just born in Dublin but raised in Catholic--&this led me to doing stage and TV roles, such as Finbar’sClass, the TV show, it’s a comedy revolvingaround a group of student-swingers.’
‘Great you are!’
‘Well not that easy as you think...at school many students said I washeavy, so I started exercising, I don’t wanna be a heavy dancer.’ He smiled,took a break & continued, ‘Well about school, I was always late & theycalled me Mr. Lazy. & I was sent back home by my teacher on the first dayat school, I just hit my teacher’s head with a rubber ring!& Mum knew this & bet me up.’
‘Oh!’
‘Mum’s kind of too strict right?’
‘Well I mean,’ Kian said as if he really felt sorry for his thought,‘your Mum’s right.’
‘Well she thought so too! Mum was a teacher too, in a drama school. Shealways complains about my messy room, & even now she always says, “Go cleanyour litter pile!” Oh yes I forgot it, about the Billie Barry Stage School,when my sister entered that school, she was only 4! She was a child star &I was always asked, “Are you Susan’s brother?”’
‘Susan McFadden?!’ asked Mark.
‘Yes, quite famous then.’
‘Oh no wonder I thought I’ve heard “McFadden” before.’
‘She’s truly a lovely girl. & let’s go on...yes about my firstprize, it was an Easter Egg when I was 8 for a singing competition, & infact, it SEEMED I love singing & dancing, but my secret dream’s being anactor! But at last you see, I think I’m gonna be a singer now.’
‘Oh actor! Well I used to have such a dream before, after I watched<Grease>.’
‘Oh let’s see what things he’d do!’ Kian smiled wickedly, glanced atBrian.
‘Kian huh? Do you want me to show your old stories to them?’
‘Well you’ll just tell us what you did will you? I know you won’t reallysay the things out will you?’
‘You...’
‘I?’ Kian blinked his eyes, looking at Mark. He was really a lovely kidsometimes, yet just SOMETIMES.
‘Well after I watched the film I went back to my bedroom & foundDad’s jacket--no, I found his jacket & went back to my bedroom, & facedthe huge mirror & imagined I was Danny.’
‘You have a big mirror in your bedroom?’ asked Brian.
‘Well it WAS huge for me then.’
‘Thank God you just imagined you were Danny,’ said Kian, ‘you don’tknow,’ he turned to Bryan, ‘he used to dream about that he was a great tennisplayer, he’s the kind that spend 24 hours daydreaming, thanks for that he’sborn in the countryside of Sligo, no tennis courts there.’
‘So you see I started singing.’
‘& started making troubles at school.’
‘Yeah I was really a troublemaker then.’ said Mark, ‘But I’ve never hitmy teacher with a rubber ring. I just karting, I think that’s alright isn’tit.’
‘Well that’s in fact not really alright...too dangerous.’
‘Oh once I dated a girl & her parents said so too! I tried my bestto behave like a nice kid but just forgot to hide this, & they soon becameangry & shouted, ‘NEVER TAKE MY DAUGHTER NEAR THE KARTING!!!’ Oh that wasso...embarrassing!’
‘You...don’t you know that you can’t say everything to your girl’sfamily...’
‘We gotta be honest don’t we...’
Seconds of silence.
‘& you?’ Shane asked the blond boy next to Brian. His sea blue tightshirt looked much more formal than Brian’s bag-like clothes. His eyes has beengazing the floor. He hasn’t spoken anything during their nearly 10-munite talk,& it seemed that he even hasn’t smiled as well. He’s been like air, but icyair. Hearing the words, he looked up at Shane, but the eyes soon slipped downback to the ground. Just for a moment, but penetrating like a sword.
‘Nicholas Byrne,’ He raised his head & showed a tranquil smile,‘Nicky’s okay.’ The two eyes met. Shane’s heart suddenly vibrated. Not for theeyes--not yet--or the simple words, but the special magnetic voice with naturalhuskiness.
After seconds of blank in his mind, ‘Then Nicky, may’ve ever been insome bands?’ he understood Kian’s feeling--really nothing better to say.
‘Can’t say I have you know, Dad has a band singing in a restaurant &I often help set the instruments, also sing karaoke with him frequently.’
‘Well do you usually sing your father’s songs or...’
‘Sometimes my father’s band’s & I also have my own songs. Once on aparty after an exam, I was already 15, when everyone was nearly crazy hangingout, I was in Furnace, a nightclub in Dublin, closed now. I’ve already had 11songs then. Also when I was about 17 I lived in Leeds, once I with three boysfrom Dublin told three girls what we did there. I told them we were in a newIrish boy band called OTT. They really believed us you know. They asked if weknew Boyzone, we pretended that we knew, & they even asked us forautographs. It WAS a lie then but it seems it’s not now.’
‘Oh I used to sing in pubs too.’
Nicky smiled, dropped his eyes & said, ‘About “pub”, you know atfirst when I was just singing there & wondering why didn’t they interruptme like they’ve done to others, so I just kept on singing--’
‘Oh you should’ve been there!’ cried Brian, ‘He sang <Father &Son> & it was GREAT! Really the song fits him so well!’
Nicky didn’t answer but smiled & went on, ‘when I finished & Isaw Louis there. I didn’t know who he was & I just rushed to him & said“STAY THERE! STAY THERE! I WANT YOU IN MY NEXT POP BAND! I WANT YOU IN MY NEXTPOP BAND!” Louis told me I’m gonna be a famous POP singer in a POP band, but‘cause you know I myself just pronounce “pub” & “pop” nearly the same, soat first I was just wondering oh why it’s a PUB band & I just told myselfoh I don’t wanna be in a PUB band...’
‘I DID sing in pubs, it’s not that bad.’ said Shane.
‘He made French Fries,’ Kian took up the thread, ‘it’s of course a greatjob. Oh fries, I love it.’
‘Who told you so?’
‘As I remember,’ Kian smiled wickedly, ‘it should be you.’
‘Oh really.’ Shane said with a wry smile. ‘But that doesn’t matter.’ He added.
‘Alright, you made Fries as singing.’
‘Why do you like Fries so much? Fries’re McDonalds’ job.’
‘Oh no more McDonalds!’ cried Brian suddenly.
‘What’s wrong?’
‘I’ve been a guard there & it was terrible!’
‘Boring right?’
‘Of course.’
Seconds of silence. No one has ever noticed the faint smile congealed onone side of Nicky’s lips in a flash, except Shane. ‘He’s always forgotten.’ Hethought.
‘You said your father has a band?’ Shane turned to Nicky.
‘Yes why?’
‘Well...maybe I’ve seen him.’
‘So?’
‘Oh you know what I mean.’ But in the eyes he saw no reaction. Avoidingthe eyes, he added, ‘Okay, what I mean to say is what the name of the band is.’
‘Nikki & Studz.’
‘Sounds familiar. Racecourse Inn in Baldoyle?’
Answered with soft nodding.
‘THAT’S YOUR FATHER?!’ Shane exclaimed. ‘He’s great! You know Boyzone?Shane, Keith & Ronan has drunk there! Oh that’s YOUR father! He’s really agood singer!’
‘Thanks.’ said Nicky, looking up into his eyes with a faint smile. ‘hehas a dream you know, he hopes we can outdo him.’
‘We will.’ said Shane.3
Hearing the words, he looked up at Shane & eyes soon slipped downback to the ground. He licked the lips4& smiled silently. Then his eyes turned to the window, gazing outside intothe distance.
2 Seas**In the Sun-Where Dreams Come True Tour (Dublin) 開頭Ki的solo完之後. Ki小小地有點跑調不要管了啦. 動作好萌有木有.小蘿蔔什麼的最可愛了. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNDU1MTAwMjQw.html?f=1808074227:52
3 關於這個回答有點小故事. 初稿寫成了We’ll go together (不是我居心不良也不是Shay居心不良. 真是沒反應過來!)
4 舔嘴唇什麼的最經典了!很萌的有木有.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 09:57:03 | 显示全部楼层
今天先这么多吧 译版我这边大概是没有了 小C那天译了一段忍无可忍罢工了 :P
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 09:58:49 | 显示全部楼层
家族的排版怎么老有问题呢...少那么多空格
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发表于 2013-7-29 09:59:44 | 显示全部楼层
哈哈,沙发,加油,我挺你!!

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我排的版哎 word排的好好的 多好看啊 就这么没了...555  发表于 2013-7-29 10:16
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 10:05:52 | 显示全部楼层
注释的数字应该是有个圈的 结果那个圈就这么不见了...
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 10:34:34 | 显示全部楼层
想看我排好版的比较整齐的文的同学可以把邮箱私信给我:) 这排版说实话我自己看都难受
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。。英文看的好不习惯啊。。。。。。。。好吧。' `; h# L6 f2 E2 ^, ~$ G
还是顶一下咯。加油

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主要是语言不习惯啦。。排版什么的,,,都不是大问题。。。毕竟英语看的太少了= =课本都看不下去。。。。  详情 回复 发表于 2013-8-3 23:46
总算有人看了...英文是语言不习惯还是格式不习惯还是  发表于 2013-7-30 10:16
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-30 10:20:11 | 显示全部楼层
PARTII
Hey whatever, let your beauty come alive, let your colour fill the sky.& say whatever, why don’t you liberate your mind,let your colour fill the sky.
Hey Whatever
He listened. Silence. Hasn’t he got up?
He knocked lightly at the door. No resp**e.
He knocked again. No resp**e.
‘What’s wrong?’
He knocked harder. No resp**e, but the door opened slowly.
He quietly went in & locked the door. The room was tidy. He WASawake, but just like asleep, still & silent, leaning back in the chair. Inhis hand were some photos.
He went behind him. He was deep in memories. He wasn’t really looking atthe photos, but nowhere.
He wanted to call him back to this practical world.
‘But should I?’ he wondered, & unc**ciously his hand was on theshoulder.
He felt the body under his hand quivered suddenly, then another handpatted on his--the hand was ice-cold.
‘Shane?’ asked in a low voice.
‘Did I bother you?’
‘Not really.’ he dropped his head, knocking the floor with his heel.Hair hung down & covered his eyes. The enchanting morning in Dublin,sunshine casting at his serene profile.5
Shane wanted to say something, but stopped. Sometimes memories can onlybe shared with our own heart, & only ourselves can keep those fragilememories deep inside. He didn’t know what he has been thinking of, & hedidn’t want to know. Everyone has a softest space inside the heart where themost-treasures are kept, secretly.
Extreme quietness in the room.
Unfortunately & unexpectedly, the silence was broken by the quicksteps coming upstairs.
‘What are you doing inside?’ with hard knocks on the door.
‘Nicky?’ Shane turned to the state in the chair.
He stood up, nimbly put the photos away & went to open the door.
‘What’s up?’ he leaned against the doorframe lethargically as if nothinghad happened.
‘That’s what I thought.’ Kian slowly shook his head & smiled.
‘So what’s up?’ Nicky turned about & sat on the bed next to Shane,left the door open. Kian tacitly went in & locked the door.
‘You look serious,’ said Kian, ‘what’s wrong?’
‘Well...nothing...’ equivocated Shane, ‘Really, nothing.’
‘Alright, as you like.’ he winked at Shane.
‘Well...Nicky,’ Shane finally remembered why he came in.
‘Football,’ Nicky interrupted, significantly smiled, ‘I’m coming.’

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‘Well done!’ sitting on the field, Shane said.
‘You looked experienced,’ Bryan said, ‘you’ve been a goalie?’
Nicky smiled, looking at the ground, ‘Yes.’
‘Professional?’
He hesitated & nodded gently.
‘Which team?’
‘Leeds.’ answered Nicky, raised his head, gazing into the distance.
‘LUFC?’ asked Shane cautiously. He knew he was again lost in the unknownmemories.
‘Yeah,’ his eyes touched Shane momentarily, smiled flickered across hislips, ‘& some others before. At first Home Farm & St. Kevins Boys inNorth Dublin, then I became a professional player & joined Leeds United asa goalkeeper in 1995, & you remember the FA Youth Cup in 1997? I was asquad member, we won. I played for Leeds for two years, then I left when mycontract expired in June 1997. I played in a reserve game for Scarborough F.C.and in a trial game with Cambridge United before returning to join Dublin clubShelbourne. I then signed for Cobh Ramblers playing 11 games, then St. FrancisF.C., all in League of Ireland.’7
‘So then you chose to join the band?’
‘Well you know Newcastle & Everton & those teams all wanted me,& I DID wanna go on with my goalie career, but after all I wasn’t chosen, they say I was still too short. I went back toDublin & thought about what I should do next. I really didn’t know, I feltmyself lost direction & hope at all. I even c**idered having a try inGardai. But anyway I didn’t, I at last chose music. You can say this band savedme, who knows what I’d do without it.’
‘I love football too. & horses, I have about 40 in my stable.’
‘Really.’ eyes met, Nicky smiled.
‘Oh God get it away!’ cried Mark, ‘Kian! Get it away!’8
‘What?’ Kian looked around.
‘That...there...’
‘The ladybird?’
‘No this...’
‘The pigeon?’
‘Yes! Don’t let it fly around me!’
‘What’s wrong with it...come dear...yeah that’s a nice boy...’
‘You’re afraid of flying birds?’ Nicky asked, glanced at Kian who wasbusy playing with the pigeon.9
‘Yes, I don’t know why.’
‘Oh me too.’
‘Flying birds?’
‘No but I don’t know the reason either. I’m afraid of, or you’d rathersay I hate taking lifts.’
‘Then you mean you always use stairs?’
‘Yes.’
‘Even for example 10th floor?’
‘I’ve climbed 12th floor.’
‘God how did you make it?!’
‘I realized it when I was young, so I haven’t taken lifts for a longtime. Of course sometimes I had to take them.’
Kian smiled naughtily.
Shane glanced at Nicky. He raised the head, looking into the sky, hairflying with the breeze. He followed his eyes—colourful sky.
5最愛米人側影~還有關於為什麼是Dublin.原來寫的是Sligo. 後來想想Nix待在Sligo幹嘛啊. 閑成這樣我知道已經不太符合實際了. 就算他們閑到可以踢球.找Nix也不該去Sligo找啊.SHNICKY還沒到同居的地步.這裏設定的是幾個人去Dublin Nix的家裏找他. 至於他在想什麼. 就是原來在LUFC的那些事. 好像他回Dublin之後挺受打擊的.居然發神經想進Gardai. 虧得沒進啊. 這要殉職了我得哭死.
file:///C:\Users\songlh\AppData\Local\Temp\msohtml1\01\clip_image002.jpg6這個怎麼推理出來的自己猜去. 不明寫線索了.其實也沒什麼線索可寫. 好朋友心有靈犀嘛. 就當Nix聰明點好了. 再說這篇也不是推理.到下下篇文的時候吧. 應該有一篇推理懸疑悲劇SHNICKY+BK+MARKEVIN胡扯小長虐文上來.7其實還有一段是從09年開始: On 14 May 2009 Byrne was a substitute for a Liverpool F.C. Legends XIthat played against an All Star XI in a Hillsborough Memorial match to mark the20th anniversary of the Hillsborough disaster. All the proceeds from the matchwent to the Marina Dalglish appeal. He represented the Republic of Ireland atU15, U16 and U18 levels. He is a fan of Celtic FC, and on 9 August 2011 playedin a Celtic Legends XI at Celtic Park in front of a 54,000 crowd against aManchester Utd Legends team. In 2010, Byrne participated and won Soccer Aid, aBritish charity football match, alongside bandmate Shane Filan and the Rest of theWorld Team. Nix這段可能說得有點亂.我自己也不是太明白. 因為是把Wiki和Baidu的資訊綜合起來寫的. 兩邊本身就有點矛盾. 又沒有具體的時間.所以我只能按我自己的理解模模糊糊寫一下.誰讓資料也模模糊糊呢.8啊哈哈哈MARKIAN果然有愛.9很明顯吧.Bop Bop Baby MV. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjcwNTM4ODg4.html3:07 Ireland我不知道. 不過英國鴿子真和中國麻雀一樣的. 滿天飛. 根本不怕人. 那會兒在大英博物館前面. 我們坐那兒鴿子就在頭頂上飛. Lake District的疣鼻天鵝也是的. 就湖邊上那些速食啊咖啡啊那些露天座位. 跟你搶. 你還搶不過它.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-30 10:21:52 | 显示全部楼层

RE: 【原创】【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER I PART II】

好吧还是很乱...- n5 z9 I, F5 j( w% T# ^
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-30 10:24:15 | 显示全部楼层
为毛我改不了题目...
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-31 11:59:41 | 显示全部楼层
PARTIII
You’re the only one who really knew me at all.
Against All Odds (Take a Look at Me Now)
‘Virgin Mary.’ he whispered.
Facing all the excited fans, now, the Where Dreams Come True Tour, thelast stop, Madrid.
No need to say much about their great performance & the crazy fansduring the concerts. After the half-a-year tour, it’s time to celebrate it& rest.
On the plane.10 Waking up & seeing Shane sitting on hisleft, sleeping, he pushed up the window & looked outside. Boring sky.
He took a sip of the coffee. The first years had been so tired. Heturned to Shane who was still dozing. He was leaning on the back of the seatwith a peace expression on his face. He smiled.
He really needed to rest, he knew that.
Then he felt something furry touched his face on the left &something heavy pressed onto his shoulder. He recovered from the reverie &found a head leaning on him. He instinctively wanna push him back to the seat,but at the very moment his hand touched him, he stopped, hand slipped down. Hewondered why he’d been about to do so—what that head mattered?
He looked back at the face, still peace. He smiled.11
Then he heard a light voice asking, ‘Hey Nicky...free?’
His smile soon disappeared & looked up. 12Kian was there bending over the back of his seat, grinning.
‘What’s up?’
‘Nightclub tonight?’
‘Which one?’
‘The...OUCH!’ cried Kian & his head disappeared from the back of theseat.
He just heard a mess in the seats in front of him.
‘What’re you doing Bryan?’
‘What’re YOU doing you should ask.’
‘Head away or I’ll sit on.’
‘You sit here, don’t move.’
‘What?’
‘Ah...that’s good.’
‘Hey! You! You!’
Silence.13
‘Mark?’ called Kian.
‘Mark? Mark!’
‘Still asleep.’ said Nicky.
‘Then you come.’
‘But...hey you’re awake?’ the head wasn’t on him.
‘The terrible cry.’ answered with a wry smile, ‘But comfortable here.’he gave a light pat on Nicky’s shoulder.
‘Sit there.’ Shane gently pushed Nicky who was about to stand up back tothe seat.
‘What’s wrong here?’ asked Shane.
‘Awake?’ said Kian, ‘Get this thing away from me.’ he pointed at Bryan’shead & the seat on his left.
‘Hmm...hey stop it...go...go...go away...I’m so sleepy...’
‘Go back to your seat, we’re having a meeting.’
‘What meeting?’ asked Shane.
‘Nightclub tonight.’ he felt a hand softly dropped onto his shoulder& slipped down along his back.
He turned his head. It was Nicky, as usual, looking at somewhere else.
‘Without this.’ Kian added, pointed at Bryan.
‘Ah I got it. Which one?’
Bryan’s complain was completely ignored.
‘The...OUCH!’
‘HAHAHAHAHA...’
‘WHAT DO YOU LAUGH FOR?!’ shouted Kian, ‘Mark! Get him away! Mark!Mark?’
‘Still asleep.’ said Shane.
‘God...okay, what were we talking about?’
‘Nightclub tonight.’ answered Shane.
‘Which one?’
‘We were asking YOU!’
‘Which one do you prefer?’
‘Maybe...LIV?’14
‘Okay as you like,’ said Kian, ‘well in fact, I’d like a nightclub onfor example 12th floor...’
‘Why?’
‘You know what I mean.’
‘May you please climb the 12th floor with me then, Mr. Kian Egan?’ Nickysuddenly said, with a faint smile.
‘Well...it’s a nice day today huh...’
‘Hey buddy what’s the craic?’
‘Thank God you’re still alive.’ said Kian.
‘What’re you talking about?’ asked Mark again, ‘Tell me tell me what’sit?’
‘Tonight.’
‘Wow dreams really come true!’
‘What?’
‘I was just dreaming of that.’
‘Alright meeting’s over, back to sleep.’
‘Ah...party tonight...’
‘Bryan! Back to your seat!’
‘Your call Kian...Louis...’
‘Mo Dia...’ he picked up the phone.
‘Hi Louis...’
‘Brian...oh...well...I’m really trying my BEST you gotta believe me...’
Brian felt somehow proud of himself, went on sleeping with his nicelittle pillow called Kian Egan.
11此段取材於Westlife Sleepin. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNDAwNzM0OTY4.html?f=18080833 00:43
12這個stop smiling純屬為了方便情節發展. 因為這裏是SHNICKY. 主要還不是NICKIAN. NICKIAN要到後面的. 所以Nix對著Ki笑就不大對了. Nix平時也不很iceberg的. 比如說WhereDreams Come True--Seas** In The Sun. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNDU1MTAwMjQw.html?f=1808074230:11 嗯那就不得不說一說褲子問題. 小米人你在幹什麼...話說再上個類似的吧. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzIxMTU2OTI=.html?f=18080668 米人你把老頭子和小蘿蔔帶壞了.
13這個希望大家別想歪了...雖然我是想往歪了寫的...BK就是有愛啊...但是到底不那麼像吧...我說過不H就一定不會有. 本意是這樣的. Ki不是爬到椅背上跟Nix說話去了麼. BB還睡著神志不清就倒在Ki身上把他給壓下來了. 嗯好吧. 拖下來了. 然後就是Don’t move. BB就躺Ki腿上然後Ki就怒了...
14Westlife吧上的消息. 這是我能找到的比較靠譜的地方了. 具體他們那天晚上幹什麼了我也沒法知道對吧. http://tieba.baidu.com/p/1727767651#frs_nav& G9 @$ s# ]% z
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-1 10:04:28 | 显示全部楼层

RE: 【原创】【中篇更新】【EVERGREEN】【BRIARCKIANEVIN】【CHAPTER II PART IV】

CHAPTER II
TOO HARD TO SAY GOODBYE
PART IV
So how do I say,do I say goodbye? We both have our dream, we both wanna fly.
Queen of My Heart
<Mandy>,not well sold. He loved that song, he wondered why he just couldn’t enjoystaying in Westlife so much as they did. He came so hopefully, but now healmost wanted to leave.
How could theybe so reconciled to just staying in harmony part? He was a lead singer, hewanted to contribute his share, but what he’d done most was singing behindShane’s voice with the harmony.
He wanted tosing their original songs, but they never stopped covering, though there WEREmany successful ones which DID brought the young band confidence, strength& hope to go further—he realized he couldn’t go further with them, he hadto lead his own road.
He’s beensearching for a suitable reason to quit, he knew he couldn’t just tell them hehad suffered enough—he couldn’t bear to. He didn’t want to hurt them, hisdeparture should be already making them sad. He didn’t really love Westlife,but he needed them, they were friends anyway, six years. & what about fans?What should he say?
‘I’m sorry, Ihave to quit. I can’t go further with them, I have my dream.’ No.
‘Believe me,though I quit,Westlife will still go on, & I will lead my own future.’ No.
‘We’ve beentogether through these years, now we have our own different goals. We’re stillfriends.’ No.
‘Should I tellthe real reason?’ he asked himself.
‘Or should Istay for some more time?’ he soon denied the latter.
Waiting couldonly destroy both himself & Westlife. He HAD suffered enough, hadn’t he.
‘Sorry. Bye.Westlife.’3 M) ^7 S0 O/ f, h" |3 h8 |
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-1 10:11:06 | 显示全部楼层
悲催啊怎么级别还掉下去了
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